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fix the email below but no plagiarism no grammar and spelling mistakes be careful please.

To: All Staff

From: Sybil Montrose <>

Subject: New Policies about the use of Internet


Attached: E-Mail and Internet Policy

As you might have noticed, lately we were having some troubles with our bandwidth during the working hours, and our IT department found some issues with the use of the company internet by the staff.

To have better access to the company internet and to keep the right to use email for personal purposes in case of need, we decided to implement a policy of zero tolerance to the non-business-related use of the corporate internet connection. It means, in straightforward and plain English that all the online personal activities such as Facebook are no longer accepted during working hours.

Kindly understand that we are doing this to increase the download speed for work-related materials and to avoid the possibility of a virus intrusion.

A copy of the new policy is attached to this e-mail, but feel free to contact the IT department or me if you need further information about the privacy of your communications or have another idea to help to solve our problem.

Best Regards,

Sybil Montrose


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